London Bridge and Elephant & Castle seem to be transposed.

• Bedford shown between Letchworth and King's Lynn;
• No bend where King's Lynn branch joins mainline;
• Seven Oaks should be Sevenoaks;
• No explanation of grey keyline around central London;
• No station blob for Lewisham;
• Ridiculous extended loop to show Sevenoaks via Bat & Ball (ditto Wimbledon);
• Over stylised - or carefully crafted to look like a storage system at Paperchase?

A bit of a mess - looks like hand-drawn additions to something previous!

Shows Moorgate twice - one at King's Cross.

Could be good, nice and geometric, but screws up by not having the Cambridge line aligned with the Hertford loop and Moorgate branch.

Odd King's Cross with three routes squeezing into one. Also closer to Farringdon than King's Cross Thameslink - a major change between Capital Connects two systems.

Tulse Hill - Croydon a bit weak too, looks like an afterthought.

Major stations are in capitals but a lighter font.